Nicole+M.+-+Declaration+of+Independence

toc =Declaration of Independence (Final) =

Independence of North Korea Our motive for writing this document is to make North Korea a better province. In our perspective, North Korea doesn’t seem like somewhere we would ever want to live, nor do we think anyone should live there under the current government. To us the purpose of government, is to protect the people, not kill them, nor to let them starve to death like the current government of North Korea is doing. Also, the purpose is to protect the people, and to do everything in your power to make their lives more enjoyable. We the people of North Korea don’t have natural rights unless the right to starve or be put into one of the 10 concentration camps counts as a natural right. Rights we should have are the right to life, the right to liberty, and the right to freedom of speech. The right to life meaning that we have the right to eat, for example, so that we don’t starve to death; the right to liberty, so that we may do actions such as, come and go from the country as we please. Lastly, the right to freedom of speech the significance of this being that, if one of us were to say “that new tax passed on rice is stupid,” we wouldn’t be killed for saying so. North Korea’s government is violating people rights and abusing its power as a government because it is letting people starve, putting many innocent people into prison or concentration camps, and violating the rights of the prisoners who should be there. The things the government does are unjust even to the people who belong in prison; a pregnant woman in prison is sometimes either forced to have an abortion, or, forced to let the baby be killed right after the birth. The government doesn’t let you leave the country, have any contact with the outside world, or even allow you to listen to the radio from another country. Another unjust act is that, the government kills tons of innocent people not only by starvation but, if for example, an innocent woman with kids tries to escape a concentration camp to run back to her family, the guards will kill her, no matter what the situation is. This is unjust behavior, and we the people have decided to put an end to it now. These acts and many more are unforgivable and are inequitable behavior, and we the people have decided to put a stop to it now. We have no choice to break way from the current government of North Korea, because the current government is corrupt, and unjust. We the people of North Korea declare independence from Kim Jong-il.

=Declaration of Independence (Draft) =

Independence of North Korea Our reason for writing this document is to make North Korea a better place. In our opinion, North Korea doesn’t seem like somewhere we would ever want to live, nor do we think anyone should live there under the current government and circumstances. The purpose of government is to protect the people not kill them nor to let them starve to death like North Korea is doing. The purpose is to protect the people and to do everything in your power to make their lives better. We the people of North Korea don’t have natural rights unless the right to starve or be put into one of the 10 concentration camps counts as a natural right. The rights we should have are the right to live, the right to liberty, and the right to freedom of speech. The right to live meaning that we have the right to eat (for example) so that we don’t starve. The right to liberty that we may do things such as come and go from the country as we please. Lastly the right to freedom of speech meaning that if one of us were to say “that new tax passed on rice isn’t fair,” that we would not be killed for saying so.

North Korea’s government is violating people rights and abusing its power as a government because it is letting people starve, putting many innocent people into prison or concentration camps, and violating the rights of the prisoners who are suppose to be there. A pregnant woman in prison is sometimes either forced to have an abortion or forced to let the baby be killed right after the birth. The government doesn’t let you leave the country, have any contact with the outside world, or even allow you to listen to the radio from another country. The government kills tons of innocent people not only by starvation but, if for example, an innocent woman with kids tries to escape a concentration camp to run back to her family, the guards kill her because those are their orders. This is unjust behavior, and we the people have decided to put an end to it now.

These and many more are inequitable behavior, and we the people have decided to put a stop to it now. We have no choice to break way from the current government, because the current government is corrupt, and unjust. We the people of North Korea declare independence from Kim Jong-il.