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toc =Declaration of Independence (Final) = Oscar Mogollon October 28, 2010 Period 2° Sudan Declaration of independence Outline/ Essay Outline: I. Preamble  a. The people of Sudan are tired of these dirty mistreated ways!  II. Statements of Human Rights  a. Government is meant to keep peace in states, not bring cause, and mass destruction.  b. The people of Sudan don’t posses many rights, their rights are basically just written down there not forced to do.  III. List of Complaints  a. The government of Sudan is // not // doing a good job at controlling their state. People in Sudan can steal one another, and get away with murder.  IV. Statement of Independence  a. The people that have grown up and lived in Sudan for their entire life wont want to leave because they have gotten used to dirty low class life styles, but sooner or later we will break out of Sudan.  b. If the government of Sudan wants to keep us in their country they must make changes in the government as in, making people by force follow the laws of Sudan, murder is an automatic death sentence etc. most rules that the USA has to keep that country at Pease. Essay: In Sudan the streets are dangerous and you shouldn’t walk any street alone. This is how dangerous it is to live in Sudan as a simple civilian. Here we can just wonder around anywhere we want. People don’t leave Sudan because it is where they grew up and they have just gotten used to being mistreated by the governments and to get beat up on the streets. The government should do a lot more to make Sudan a suitable place for a children. This is why I believe that we the people of Sudan should make a document for our rights as men and woman of Sudan. So we can have our freedom. The system of government was made so people could live freely in all countries, but in Sudan it seems like the government only cares about them self and not us. If the government doesn’t do something it will lead to more destruction and more stealing it Sudan. The non-criminals of Sudan should have a say in what happens in the government, so we can also have peace in where we live. Everything is madness in the streets we should have more police running the streets and more protection from criminals. We are not giving enough police help, and other types forces, so they can help us when we are in need. This country doesn’t even believe that stealing isn’t a problem even stealing a human being! This clearly shows that the government dose not care one bit. People here have also been known to get away from murder in out country. They either think that its not a big deal and just give them a find of 5 00 dollars or so but this shouldn’t be this type of stuff should be serious and taken to court? The government has to take charge of this, and not treat it like it’s no big deal, because death no mater where it is affects every one in the community. We all have grown up as children to young strong independent adults, and we believe that this has been going on for way to long and it must stop now! We have entered the 21-century and we must upgrade to catch up to other civilizations and not be a third world country anymore. Otherwise we all will break out of Sudan and find a better place to live in like USA. The government of Sudan should force the people of Sudan to obey their laws and to not just cause trouble. The government should send a reporter to the capital of America (Washington D.C) and make an educational film for us the people of Sudan so we can learn new ways to be civilized human beings.

=Declaration of Independence (Draft) =

In Sudan the streets are dangerous and you shouldn’t walk any street alone. This is how dangerous it is to live in Sudan as a simple civilian. Here we can just wonder around anywhere we want. People don’t leave Sudan because it is where they grew up and they have just gotten used to being mistreated by the governments and to get beat up on the streets. The government should do a lot more to make Sudan a suitable place for a children. This is why I believe that we the people of Sudan should make a document for our rights as men and woman of Sudan. So we can have our freedom.

The government was made so people could live freely in all countries, but in Sudan it seems like the government only cares about them self and not the people of Sudan. If the government doesn’t do something it will lead to more destruction and more stealing it Sudan. The non-criminals of Sudan should have a say in what happens in the government, so we can also have peace in where they live. Everything is madness in the streets we should have more police running the streets and more protection from criminals.

They are not giving enough force help to us, the people of Sudan. This country doesn’t even believe that stealing isn’t a problem even stealing a human being! This clearly shows that the government dose not care one bit. People here have also been known to get away from murder in out country. They either think that its not a big deal and just give them a find of 500 dollars or so but this shouldn’t be this type of stuff should be serious and taken to court? The government has to take charge of this, and not treat it like it’s no big deal, because death no mater where it is affects every one in the community.

We all have grown up as children to young strong independent adults, and we believe that this has been going on for way to long and it must stop now! We have entered the 21-century and we must upgrade to catch up to other civilizations and not be a third world country anymore. Otherwise we all will break out of Sudan and find a better place to live in like USA. The government of Sudan should force the people of Sudan to obey their laws and to not just cause trouble. The government should send a reporter to the capital of America (Washington D.C) and make an educational film for us the people of Sudan so we can learn new ways to be civilized human beings.